Rough cut feedback

Pros

• Edited to perfection
• intros shows mystery to what its about (leaves audience to the edge of their seats)
• good productions logo
• smooth pan shot
• no shaking of camera 
• fits to genre
• calm opening, this shows genre is not action packed.          

Cons

• Too short
• Diagetic sound only
• add music, could help convey the impact of thriller. ( help draw the audience attention)
• looks more like a trailer.
• Enlarge production logo
• more footage!!!!!
• decide what to do about the titles.

Rough cut